What I'm going to do to improve my Folly Brook advert final edit:
• Smoother editing through the advert such as cutting. • Make the video more interesting through adding music and interviews and explaining what the Folly Brook Plant shop is about. • Adding text to tell you about the types of plants each one is • Show the people involved in helping the shop develop and grow e.g. Footage of students helping out. • Add After Effects to the advert for pop ups of who is being interviewed, making the video look professional.